the haiku diaries


January 28, 2010 by Rachel Dickinson
January 28, 2010, 9:27 am
Filed under: haiku, rachel's post | Tags: , , ,

Heavy air means snow —
I can feel it and smell it —
anticipation.

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I like this one. Just like you can feel the rain coming, you can also feel the snow approaching!

Comment by Kelly

Thanks, Kelly. I have a kid who can also feel the snow coming — I guess not everyone can.

Comment by rachelbirds




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