the haiku diaries


December 28, 2009 by Jenna Schnuer
December 28, 2009, 3:43 pm
Filed under: haiku, jenna's post | Tags: , ,

Day slip slides away.
Productivity? Short lived.
Maybe more coffee?

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like your poem…but perhaps better without the ? in the 2nd line…

Comment by ron kule

Thanks but the ? is more my voice.

Comment by Jenna Schnuer

Thanks for your comment, Jenna. Totally understood that it was deliberate, and I see what it does to the communication of the poem.

Comment by ron kule

Thanks Ron. And I hope to see you round these parts more in the future. A good 2010 to ya…

Comment by Jenna Schnuer




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