October 28, 2009

October 28, 2009 by rachelbirds

October 28, 2009, 9:16 am
Filed under: haiku, rachel's post | Tags: dog, haiku, melancholy

The dog looks at me
and sighs — hmmmph — head on his paws;
melancholy gaze.

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I loved this. Can just see the dog’s expression. I am in awe of haiku-writers, such compression! Wow!

Comment by Alexandra October 29, 2009 @ 10:08 am

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